Tuesday 8 January 2013

Emma's photo feedback


Sophie- Video Blog.


Emmas mock video diary


Sophies Mock Result

AEE - 18 - L4
Ex - 16 - Low L4
T - 4 - L2

38/50

Why you received this level: Argument and Explanation
- Relevant to set question
- Developed argument supported by case study material
How to improve:
- Make more references to camera, composition and sound in order to back up your arguments and examples.

Why you received this level: Terminology
-Relevant and accurate terminology
- Use of the the correct terminology
How to improve:
- make more references to terminology when necessary instead of using other words.


Emma- Mock essay analysis.

A/E/E- MID LEVEL 4.  17/20
To get full marks analyse every example you use for example why a certain camera angle is used etc.

EX- HIGH LEVEL 3. 15/20
Have more of a range of examples from all technical areas. Focus on sound and editing.

T- MID LEVEL 1. 3/10
Revise terminology and use more in your exam. Some inaccuracies are acceptable for a level 2.